I liked this piece, it is generally dark and moody, but the changing tempo and mood swings make it interesting. The intro is calm but slightly disturbed, and the seque into the second, darker portion is smooth. However, some of the melodies are abandoned too quickly to register, for example the change at 00:51. It was fun and upbeat, something I enjoyed, but it was over in about ten seconds and the melody was quickly forgotten. That melody would be nice if it were repeated once or twice, so that the section does not seem so out of place and random. There are a few mistakes, or awkward moments such as 00:30, which are distracting. The softer, wistful parts in the middle and the end I liked a lot. I picture rain falling at dusk around a teen in a wheatfield somewhere.
Overall a very smooth, well played song, but I'd like it more if each section was longer, and the melodies were clearer. One of the better acoustic songs I've heard on Newgrounds. 5/5.
Thank you so much for giving me a real critique!
I don't get many chances to play in front of real people so any feedback helps me improve my playing. I will take your word into account and work on the song more.
Though it would be great with lyrics, something to explain the rocket and crashing sounds. I think it would be great as a loop, sans the sound effects.
That was exactly my thought, but the lyrics did not work out my voice did not work =P! of course that was before I owned a professional microphone, so things might be different now.
Plus I have to find the save file if it still exists so I can edit.
- Thanks for the comment! XD
This is one of the best techno pieces I have heard on Newgrounds - I like the how the energetic piano mixes with the electronica instrument at the beginning, and the bass beat and trumpet thing make it a very versatile piece of music. I can imagine this used for parties, background music, ect. 5/5, 10/10.
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